Recount Writing-At the Pools.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language
for recount writing.

This is the published copy of my writing

On Saturday morning I went to the pools with
my mum and my dad to have a swim. 
First, we went to have a feed.
Next, I went to the shop.
After that, I went home. 
Then we went to the park.
I slid down the slide.